Our Precious Valley Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Our Precious Valley

Rating: 5.0


We often walked that mountain trail,
And somehow we would never fail,
To stop to look, on the valley view,
Those lovely days I spent with you.

And in the distance we could see,
It meant so much to you and me,
Our place of birth,
Beneath the trees,
Right there,
In our precious valley.

Surrounding mountains,
Glowed in the sun,
You were my guide,
My precious one,
To, spend time with you,
Was so much fun,
I never will forget you.

The sun shone upon us,
From afar,
If only to walk with you again,
On those mountains,
Days we spent,
You were my precious
Shining star,
And I'll forever love you.

Jayne Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 May 2022

i love this heartfelt poem of yr loved one. It reminds me of my recent loss of my mother Bravo! ! ! ! !

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Thank you so much LeeAnn x I appreciate your lovely comments. Sending my deepest sympathy xx

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 May 2022

Beautiful! Amazingly loveliest worded poem, dear Jayne! I have enjoyed tremendously.5 Stars full score

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Thank you for your kind comments Sylvia x Much appreciated x

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Jayne Louise Davies

Jayne Louise Davies

Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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