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(10th july 1996/Samastipur (Bihar) / India)

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Orthodox Love

I am not a middle aged man
neither my thought is as such
I am the result of grief told with romance
and for praising beauty, i leave no chance
my love is orthodox, and i am paralysed,
never bothered to remove my ugly mask
and, you know my darling never asks
why am i so ugly beneath the beautiful face
and, i pat her forhead and give my love,
but remember, my love is not that orthodox..

Submitted: Sunday, July 14, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, July 16, 2013


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  • Heather Wilkins (8/5/2013 4:18:00 PM)

    a good write let me say I like the length of your poem sometimes I think poets repeat themselves to often. until their work becomes boring. I like this very much keep on writing.

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  • Melikhaya Zagagana (7/15/2013 7:23:00 AM)

    you can always continue when you get a chance, other than that spot on. keep writing poet.

  • Hazel Durham (7/15/2013 6:27:00 AM)

    Interesting, original with great lines and thought provoking! !

  • Payal Parande (7/14/2013 10:55:00 AM)

    Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage....
    amazing write with good choice of words...great job
    i am proud of you
    love
    didi

  • Jenie Franksay (7/14/2013 9:23:00 AM)

    u cud have elaborated it a bit. any way good write

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