Openly Discuss Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Openly Discuss

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Openly discuss

Why should you cry?
And try
To see through her eyes
When she lies

Make one point clear
And have no fear
Ship can be carried not by one
But it is jointly done

It she is as you say
Thinking to part away
Make it clear
From your side sans fear

There is not use to stay
And pay
Heavy price
For broken promises

So make parting ways
And think other way
If that is not working out
Openly discuss and talk about

Openly Discuss
Wednesday, September 14, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2016

welcome girish dhobi Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now 16 Sep

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2016

xrince Willis shared Prince Le PoEt.'s photo to the group: I LOVE POETRY TOO. Yesterday at 01: 19 · 16 Sep

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 September 2016

So make parting ways And think other way If that is not working out Openly discuss and talk about Truly spoken. A nice message to the society. Nice work.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2016

So make parting ways And think other way If that is not working out Openly discuss and talk about

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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