One Mad Summer Afternoon Poem by Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

One Mad Summer Afternoon

Rating: 5.0


One Mad Summer Afternoon,
Forgetting to hold my breath,
I was swept away in an ocean
Of passion and futility,
Without any thought of resuscitation.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
... Sheila 22 April 2007

This is a really good poem. Everything could be said in only a few lines. A '10'

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Michael Fischer 22 April 2007

Good poem! Short, effective, and mysterious in a way. Top marks! -Michael

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