One Liners 141-150 (Musings) Poem by Indira Renganathan

One Liners 141-150 (Musings)

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141.Beauty has an inner colour that reflects outer through the eyes on one's face

142.All that glitters is not gold...so too the farther stars

143.Sun is a god-star close to our heart.So He doesn't winkle at us like other stars

144.Sleep can talk, walk and dream...sleep is wakeful in its own domain

145.Fate throws challenges one by one...how we face and cross is the game of life

146.'Love you" said a good butterfly..'already gang-raped stupid, I'm wilting now'said the flower

147.Love thinks it's divine..life says 'beware'

148.Man always wants to be identified...'how? ' is the valid question

149.Who can sing the song of the sea? ..Conch

150.Breath sings..heart percusses..audience ears listen..nature's body concerto

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 05 October 2019

All lines are really good! But of all, I love 145,146 and 150! Indeed life is full of trials.... but how we face them matters more. The flower's angry tirade to the butterfly is so natural. She is already gang raped and she cannot tolerate it anymore. She is on the point of a collapse! Brilliant!

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 September 2019

Lovely single liners indeed, all, but 147,148, and 149 stand out.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 September 2019

Brilliant and wonderful musings, Indira.. Thoughts that convey word of wisdom. I was smiling while I was reading Line 146. Well thought and conveyed write. Onto my Poem List. I want to take this opportunity to thank you for all your wonderful comments on my poems. You gave me inspiration. God bless always.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2019

Nice one liners is presented here. I like most the Liner No.142,145 and 146. Among these lines the 146th line i, e..'Love you" said a good butterfly..'already gang-raped stupid, I'm wilting now'said the flower... is meaningful. Beautiful poem is shared by you. Thank you dear Indira madam.10

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2019

144.Sleep can talk, walk and dream...sleep is wakeful in its own domain/// the sleep and yes beautiful though of it

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