survi sharma

On Killing A Girl - Poem by survi sharma

Do you believe
my gender
yeah, i am a girl
from the country
where child ratio is so low
we are killed
in the womb
just to get a son
so mean
do you believe it
we are so pathatic
i want justice
what government is doing
do you see them all
what is happening in delhi
who wonders?
i am from the land
where gandhi ji was born
i need non violence
so i am appealing
please stop this killing
you know this world lies on
the shoulder of girls.

Comments about On Killing A Girl by survi sharma

  • Gold Star - 28,812 Points Kim Barney (2/22/2015 11:24:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. Extremely well-written. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Kinjal Sharma (8/8/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    the workdone is so cheap
    they all are haters (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anamika Jalan (8/6/2013 1:04:00 AM)

    terrific mindset of the society and our people (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (7/5/2013 5:48:00 AM)

    raise your voice against such terrible crime against female. a powerful and matured write. keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,685 Points Hazel Durham (6/22/2013 7:03:00 AM)

    It is a terrible crime against females......If more people speak out about this atrocity it will have to be stopped!
    Powerful write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 239 Points Indranil Bhaduri (6/22/2013 5:27:00 AM)

    I find your poems amazing..the voice of all the females.. go on.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (6/21/2013 12:42:00 AM)

    And in their hearts, they too shame us all for this injustice... For girls are the most valid means of continuing life and sustaining love. - survi, you are a great spokeswoman for Lady India! Brovo! ; -) Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Anoop Nair (6/20/2013 2:30:00 AM)

    Great work again Survi (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,634 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (6/19/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    need non violence
    Needed everywhere. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aric Beers (6/19/2013 1:10:00 AM)

    Tragedy like this is occurring the world over and it's sickening to watch. Glad to see someone speaking out. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,738 Points Dinesh Nair (6/17/2013 11:08:00 AM)

    Your poem points finger at a grave reality gripping India. Beyond your engineering course and its ranges may your poetic talents exult in course of time. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 211 Points R.j. Wynn (6/17/2013 9:21:00 AM)

    Where two or more gather in prayer is a miracle, pray with me! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rose Bloodthorn (6/16/2013 4:52:00 PM)

    Crazy world we live in true (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,722 Points David Wood (6/16/2013 2:44:00 PM)

    This is a sad fact of what happens in your country. You have to be part of the message to change peoples attitude by writing about it highlighting the plight of women. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,497 Points Unwritten Soul (6/16/2013 11:37:00 AM)

    I feel bad for this, because how low animals are, they never choose gender of their offspring...and never kill them for any purpose...but human with mind, do come? so the level of these human is less classy than any loving animals..God send lil new baby as a responsibility to take, not as something to fit our desires and life style as they think..Oh God, help us_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,269 Points Vishal Sharma (6/16/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    girls are killed in the womb
    so sad
    what a tragic end of that innocent infant
    it must be against the law (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,798 Points Rohit Sapra (6/16/2013 9:30:00 AM)

    To be honest, it is a woman who presents us into this world. A woman is a mother, daughter and sister, as well. Without a woman this world would never exist and that is reality of this life. To protect any woman who is ever in trouble is surely responsibility of every good citizen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/16/2013 9:06:00 AM)

    Hye great starting of poetry, u hv selected most important bitter reality to be presented, deep message lies behind..well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

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