seeing two white swans
floating on the clear pond
so close to each other
against a gray horizon
one wonders
where do worries come from?
dear suki....one wouldd think that the old chinese school....of Quyuan, Li bai and Du Fu....has gone past...in the stuff of lore....but reading your poem tells me no the great ones are alive and well....in you... beautiful poetry and i rellly liked it.... u just have to check out any one(my choice Li Bai) ...to see for your self....and i dont know if u r chinese... very well wrtitten....and as expected....deep reflective....otherworldly charm cheers and ten
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
indeed, there are those moments, rare moments, when one feels there is nothing wrong with the world, absolutely nothing.... beautiful Suki....