Sweet Sour Poem by Suki Nakamura

Sweet Sour

Rating: 5.0


thinking about
you is
sweet sour.

you're sweet
when absent
you're sour
when present.

i need a revision
of my disposition.
i want you to become
a little bitter

cure my diabetes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 10 November 2009

you're sweet when absent you're sour when present ......superb

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Sandra Martyres 10 November 2009

Nice unusual poem Suki-San.. I enjoyed it.10

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Ying Escalona 10 November 2009

oishi desu Suki-san..nice poem, hai, , , , a great cure..

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