The hand shakes
The back aches
The heart quakes
Then life breaks.
The truth if I've ever heard it. And we're all headed that way.10
So true... sometimes it is a relief to glance on a minimalist write as it gives the mind a chance to condense and appreciate the full meaning.... this is so true... tyvm karen
The symptom of old age is nicely executed. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
Spot on. Brevity is the soul of the wit. Your poem illustrates that well.
Your poem is pretty well right on. As we age our beings become more frail usually. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a sad but true summation of the way I feel as I turn 76 years young today. Good Write, short but true, Your friend Lynn