Oh My Sorrow (Ghazal) Poem by Indira Renganathan

Oh My Sorrow (Ghazal)

Rating: 5.0


Oh my shadow, you are like my sorrow
Leaving me not alone to rest in peace

Oh my shadow you're dark like my sorrow
Leaving me not alone to rest in peace

Oh my shadow I know you're my body
That fell in wrong love losing all its peace

Oh my shadow I know you're my sorrow
For my Sun has left far with all my peace

Oh my shadow when my sun is not here
How come you follow giving me no peace

Oh my shadow don't you try to follow
For my sun's not here, I am without peace

Oh my sorrow you are like my shadow
Leaving me not alone to rest in peace

Oh my sorrow, may this mortal fall off
Unto the dust so my soul seeks its peace

Oh my sorrow, oh my shadow, ho ho
My mortal, just leave me to sleep in peace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
me poet yeps poet 02 May 2021

Oh my shadow don't you try to follow For my sun's not here, I am without peace

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M Asim Nehal 28 April 2021

Heartfelt ghazal. Nicely composed Madam Indiraji. Much appreciated.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 April 2021

A poignant and discerning write in a wonderful poetic style. Well written.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 April 2021

A wonderful ode to sorrow! Extremely well written Ghazal with mind's puzzle..5 atars

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