Odes, Tigris And Euphrates Poem by Captain Cur

Odes, Tigris And Euphrates

Rating: 4.9


Each thought you sound through your soft verse
I replay them to my ear
and each next line is to the first
a melody sweet to hear
as the seamless words flow with grace
they are whispered on my tongue,
you teach them all to mind their place
then commingle when their sung.
A simple truth needs complex care
colored waves complete in white
then what this simple truth I share
has no product, has no right,
on what rare tree does your fruit grow
as it stands between the two,
where Tigris and Euphrates flow
what I write, I write to you.

Envisioning your length, your reach
as you channel to the last
tributaries you seal and breach;
yet, forever in your grasp,
upon the apron of your lakes
can I but embrace them all
then nothing more my heart forsakes
as your fruit begins to fall.
Between the rhythms of your waves
life implants her tender seed
through sunlight's procreating rays
each flowering plant will feed,
upon their leaves they drink the dew
which escapes the breath of night
within their hearts the nectar pools
and transforms the banished light.

What ancient land divides the two?
What history of her art?
Mesopotamia, to you
wedged between where rivers start
and flow their course, their race to sea
then empty with a searing toll
pins the basin with their mighty
surge and fills your Persian soul.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.j. Wynn 11 June 2013

This is the icing on the cake Capitan, a thousand thanks

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David Wood 13 June 2013

The sweet ebb and flow of the river is a delight to see and sit by where ever you are.

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Walterrean Salley 13 June 2013

A beautiful poetic tribute to the ancient Tigris and Euphrates, which are a poem within themselves. GHood job Captain.

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Terry Dawson 08 May 2020

What a find this page is! A bright pool in a tedious ocean! I'll be back! ! :)

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Unknown Visco girl 08 October 2019

And I opp... sksksksksk Sorry I really like I put a bad review by accident.

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Unknown Visco Girl 08 October 2019

What a beautiful poem it made me cry visco girl tears. Also, And I oop…..sksksksksksksksksksksksksksk

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Unwritten Soul 08 December 2015

Ai Ai Captain...you are a captain to move along your rhythmic poetry that brought us to such a beautiful melodies and history.... :) :)

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Shahzia Batool 16 June 2013

a broad canvas of imagination, one can envy the knowledge of geography and history, blended with the art of poetry!

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