Oasis Poem by Unwritten Soul

Oasis

Rating: 5.0


Of 1001 words you've said to me
Come closer
Be brave to look deeper into my eyes
Either you will lost in the mirage or
Discover an oasis
I'll change your mind
I'll change your words

As the sun rise from my iris
You will see
My days are not over yet
But just begin

Of 1001 tales you keep telling me
I give you only one, but the truth
You can't break me

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just a short poem i wrote to remark my birthday, as i always want to post something on 13th July. So the story is about how i was struggling to face people opinion about me when i was a kid, in the school time. But although i didnt reply, but i believe who i am, and i wont let their words shape my future. Ill set the words, and let them realise they are in illusion not in reality. Because i control my storyline
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 26 August 2021

I saw this poem because I am following M.J. Lemon, and saw that he had made a comment. Good for you not to let others influence what you believe about yourself!

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M.J. Lemon 26 August 2021

Happy belated birthday, Soul! 13 July....I also have several 'anniversaries' and your words hit a chord....Yes, 'Be brave to look deeper...' Magnificent verse, Soul. One of your finest works.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 July 2021

5 Stars full on Top for this brilliant Birthdau Tribute and to my Favourites.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 July 2021

I must add here Completest Poet's Notes, thank you very much

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 July 2021

Wishing you a very Happy BirthDAY, dear Poet I know for such a long time, superb telling in this excellent poem

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