O My Mother, May You Feel! Poem by Hira Ahsan

O My Mother, May You Feel!

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I admit,
You did all chores,
cooked me food
and washed me clothes

Never held tight,
me in your arms

Never cast on me,
a blissful glance

Never had 'I',
heard any eulogy

Evicted me from your
kind territory,
Never did I find
any place to be

Never ever gaily,
you spoke to me

Ghastly grew
the clouds of terror,
depressive thoughts
occuring ever

Sick 'I' was,
you never bothered
But,
I wasn't that bad,
as 'you' had thought

Tired of your hateful
passions for me,
betraying 'I' became
eventually...

O my Mother,
in this winter
appease me please,
Let blow the breeze
the dew clean your heart
Sweep out the grudge
that is locked in thee

O my Mother,
May you feel!
the distress myself
how had 'I' endured! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 29 March 2014

writing is a channel for catharsis...the composition shows the talent!

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Hira Ahsan 09 April 2014

ma'am my confidence increases when you like my composition.Thank you Ma'am Shahzia.

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Chinedu Dike 27 May 2015

A well expressed train of thoughts nicely penned from the heart. It baffles me whenever I see some mothers abuse their children. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Hira Ahsan 07 May 2014

thanks for such a pleasing comment..Anubhav

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Anubhav Gupta 06 May 2014

you have a good rhyme dear. you express things clearly and simply. great job keep writing =]

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Hira Ahsan 20 April 2014

Thank you for your admiration Khairul Ahsan...obliged!

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Khairul Ahsan 17 April 2014

You have politely expressed your hard feelings. This will be cathartic, no doubt. You have good expression, so keep writing.

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