O Cigarettes Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

O Cigarettes

Rating: 5.0


You are killing (O, dear cigarette)
If person is willing
And not heeding
To all warnings

Each puff
May be your last laugh
With lungs
You will not long

Is it wrong?
To smoke more with songs (certainly)
It shall show you
The gate to pass through

It is dangerous
And slogan is also famous
To play with health
Is as good s inviting to death

Millions die every year
That news all in our ear
We just brush aside
All warnings and hide

Even if casual smoking
May be silently playing
With your organs
To prove the slogans

Make habits not your master
But get rid of them faster
You cause worries to family members
Avoid bad days for brothers and sisters

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

You are killing (O, dear cigarette) If person is willing

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2013

Re: o cigarettes (Score: 1) by nprimemin on Thursday, August 22,2013 (18: 55: 26) I like your point somebody needed to say it thanks Nelson

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 September 2013

Bilal Pakbiz hahah 19 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

0 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2013

Great poem with great message.. Especially for todays youngsters.. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

0 1 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

Deleteleafsailor AMEN

0 0 Reply
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 August 2013

I smoke Sofia Hellgren38 minutes ago I´ve smoked since college and I´m 34 years old...I love smoking and smoke two packs a day. I k now it´s hazardous but still...good poem on such a serious subject.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Close
Error Success