O, Candle! Comments

This is a wonderful piece. It's sort of like a human being. We kind of consume ourselves during our lifetime giving away bits of ourselves a little at a time. I like this very much.

A stunning poem on symbols of Sacrifice and Rememberance - of giving.

A meaningful write with a nice thought to ponder. Good one.

A great poem reveling the truth! parents sacrifice many things in life almost like a burning candle which doesn't want anything in return! It's truly a master piece!

your personification of life with a candle burning for the comfort of others is just commendable..

I know I read this but I will comment again because knowing me I read it and didn't comment. I do that sometimes. This was a truly remarkable piece so full of truth. Very well done as always..

The candle has been used to great effect in this marvellous poem!

candle represents life....you defined well how candle burns itself..if it melts, light another..written in few lines but express hundreds of meanings..cheers.. naizz

Candle burns itself, goes through melting pain gradually engulfs the whole of it, but it shines everything in its surrounding... In sheer darkness it is the only light which gives us hope and vision... Beautifully written poem...

YES, be a shining Beacon of Light, All good things grow in the Light. This is a warm and inviting Poem. Inspiring, wonderful feeling....10

this si an amazing poem. this was really an astonishing insight.. in my favs it goes

Praise. i like your positive approach to the subject, lovely poem Kesav

selfless, undconditional hope and love...thats what your marvelous poem exemplifies..

A very uplifting beautiful write Ke, while the candle burns life goes on, thanks, 19 Lynda xx

an uplifting simile poem..written superbly...nice...10

I found this write, very inspriational, as its representation, to nver give up hope, as the wick is still witholding...... Bonnie

great analogy here Kesav reminds us that time is precious, the wick does not get replaced in this world

The candle is a wonderful theme, and I like how you draw the comparison, so competently with ourselves. It lights up my day! Karin Anderson

Last line renews the metaphor & a right kind of composition of words on which you are special.10+++

what a wonderful poem my friend...its life it self...picture in the most imaginative view of poetry...a big bang in the revelation of what is a poet...thank you and God bless my friend.....a 10