O, Candle! Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

O, Candle!



O, Candle,
on lighted up, you burn out
in your heart, you melt
in goodness, give out life
to those in need, you bring light
until your willing wick
holds out inside alive

The good teacher, you, preach out
the silent message of life

Day in, day out, you alike,
we, too, burn away in life
warmth to give to kith and kin,
we emit heat and light
till the end of the wick inside,
spread the brightness to their strides,
offer help to get lighted up,
renew our burnt-up life

28 02 09

Saturday, February 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: giving,life,metaphor,sacrifice,service
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 09 March 2009

an uplifting simile poem..written superbly...nice...10

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Lynda Robson 09 March 2009

A very uplifting beautiful write Ke, while the candle burns life goes on, thanks, 19 Lynda xx

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Chitra - 09 March 2009

selfless, undconditional hope and love...thats what your marvelous poem exemplifies..

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Muhammad Ali 09 March 2009

Praise. i like your positive approach to the subject, lovely poem Kesav

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this si an amazing poem. this was really an astonishing insight.. in my favs it goes

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Patti Masterman 09 July 2009

This is a wonderful piece. It's sort of like a human being. We kind of consume ourselves during our lifetime giving away bits of ourselves a little at a time. I like this very much.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 June 2009

A stunning poem on symbols of Sacrifice and Rememberance - of giving.

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Kranthi Pothineni 12 May 2009

A meaningful write with a nice thought to ponder. Good one.

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Deependra Kumar Jha 27 March 2009

A great poem reveling the truth! parents sacrifice many things in life almost like a burning candle which doesn't want anything in return! It's truly a master piece!

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Deepti Agarwal 13 March 2009

your personification of life with a candle burning for the comfort of others is just commendable..

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