Numbness Poem by Fiona Davidson

Numbness



If you are really gone from me
Then that explains the shadows
That form in the corners of me

If you have truly gone from me
That explains the ice crystals
That form around my heart

If you no longer see me here
That explains the blindness
I feel inside my spirits thoughts

If you come no more to me
That explains the numbness
I feel within my soul tonight

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Sie 05 November 2009

Full of utter emotion straight from the heart...an excellent verse

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maggie murray 03 November 2009

superb Fi and straight from the heart, I feel your pain...take care now..Maggie

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Fay Slimm 03 November 2009

Perfectly balanced this piece Fi.... and sadly toned too - - a 10 and more from Fay

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Carol Gall 03 November 2009

be at one with your sadness but do not stay linger too long

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