(From beyond time)

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Give Me Romance Everytime

Maybe a little romance is needed
Lightening our days in all this grey
To place a smile on our faces

You can't have too much romance
In a life that's filled with sadness
Making us laugh with pleasure

Give me romance to dazzle me
To make my heart sing out loud
And make me feel I'm alive

Bring on the romance to me
It's welcome in a soul of tears
Appreciated from this coldness

Give me romantic words and deeds
So pleasing to my eyes and ears
Make me happy for a little while

Give me romance everytime
To make me blush and smile
Instead of all these teasing words


rewrite of poem lost in the ether lol but still on document.....Fi

Submitted: Tuesday, June 09, 2009


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  • Aaroon Ela (2/11/2010 2:24:00 AM)

    Hello Fiona
    Believe me i am so content and being revived, this the kind of poem i like much, full of romanticism and animation.
    Love you Fiona for that and please continue.
    Aaroon
    Tripoli, Libya

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  • Matt Mooney (9/2/2009 5:44:00 AM)

    Agreed. Is romance the result of thought and consideration or a spontaneous action or an ambience in which we suddenly find ourselves? . Read my little contribution to the world of romance 'Montmartre'.

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  • Dave Dunn, aka Rhumour (7/12/2009 5:08:00 PM)

    I'm all for romance - so much better than angst, though most of us find our share of each over time, so yes, carry on lightening our days with romantic pieces :)

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (6/18/2009 3:23:00 PM)

    Whether ideological or real, romance keeps us alive.
    Nice poem, Fiona. Beautiful and lyrical.

    Naseer

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  • Subroto Chatterjee (6/10/2009 9:27:00 PM)

    You got it? !
    Cheers.
    Subroto

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  • Cindy Kreiner Sera (6/10/2009 8:34:00 AM)

    Romance is what we all need, a little goes a long way and will only grow deeper, lets make it happen Thanks - for the message.

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  • T McH (6/9/2009 10:40:00 AM)

    BRING IT ON. YAY FOR FI! ! ! ! t x

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  • Sue Sie (6/9/2009 7:39:00 AM)

    A superb poem the first time I saw it...and I will reiterate my
    comment from then....
    Excellent content on the feelings and emotions that involve love and all
    it means...We all need a little romance in our lives and this great poem
    says it all....A great write...10+++++++++
    Sue

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  • Smiley Hooker (6/9/2009 7:14:00 AM)

    wow, pretty expressive and suggestive poem! I guess you've made it easier for me, dear, i will just send him a copy of this - lol.. very nice! : -)

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  • Ency Bearis (6/9/2009 7:11:00 AM)

    nice message we need everyday must be.... to bright up our day...great one..10

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