Now You Want Me To Fly Away… Poem by Andrea Blooms Isabel

Now You Want Me To Fly Away…

Rating: 5.0


I don't know when it started,
Now it feels like I'm a mess..

I don't know when it started,
Now it feels like I'm broken..

Your name was like ma hearts beating,
Now it sounds like a lonely cry..

I don't know when it started,
Now it feels like I'm frozen..
Like I'm shattered…

All I can see now is your fading face,
As I realize you belong to someone else..

Long back, long back then I thought-
I found myself when I found you..
But that was wrong..just an illusion,
‘Cause I always knew, I always knew
I'm worthless to have you.

You were too good, too strong
And I was falling down,
Crumbling on ma foot.
I was falling down, down..

You caught me, pulled me up!
You let me rise again!
You let me shine like the star on the midnight sky!
But you were too bright,
like the mid summer days sun!

You helped me open my wings and fly!
But now I should fly away,
Fly far away from you…..

Wednesday, June 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: crush,lost,lost love,love unknown
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Andrea. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rijo Jose 06 July 2016

Ozm poem dr _BLAKE

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Andrea Blooms Isabel 07 August 2016

thank you so much Blake (Rijo Jose)

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Chinedu Dike 15 June 2016

Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and insightfully penned from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. A good depiction of heartbreak, disappointment, and tragedy occassioned by the exit of deceitful love. Thanks for sharing Isabel.

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Andrea Blooms Isabel 07 August 2016

your welcome Chinedu Dike

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Ryson Dsouza 01 July 2016

I totally agree with chinedu.. this a a level set and a perfectly penned poem with emotions attached.. thanks alot isabel for sharing..10 points

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