Now You Are Both My Friend And Foe! Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Now You Are Both My Friend And Foe!

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Now you are both my friend and foe!
Still leaving you is sweet sorrow!
Oops! You can change my tomorrow!

Still kissing you is a sweet dream
Though my love for you is extreme!
My thought goes wild like a blue-film!

Still your presence makes me love-sick
But our love-making’s chance is bleak!
I can’t read your mind; it’s all Greek!

You want to see tears on my cheek
So I am on love’s frozen peak
And my friend is a ganja’s stick!

Baby, make me believe in love.
Have you not hated me enough?
Please lock me up with love’s hand-cuff!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jahan Zeb 13 January 2012

Nice poem dear. nice thought.

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Rajendran Muthiah 18 January 2012

You are infatuated with her. I pity you if you are handcuffed by her charms, then how can you write poems? Cheers!

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Lilian Chromious Eveson 17 January 2012

Great job. Keep on writing!

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Saadat Tahir 14 January 2012

apart froma jarring line My thought goes wild like a blue-film! a fine poem...musical keep goin... :) cheers

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Ramesh Rai 14 January 2012

i m trying to find out foe in my life but i find no, no one is foe.if there is enmity there is some reason. nice poem

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Jessie Hopkins 13 January 2012

I could feel a beat as I read this. My head even started to nod. XD Wonderful job.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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