Not Just Tonight Poem by Perry Biggerstaff

Not Just Tonight

Rating: 4.0


Not just tonight …but something forever.
Not just a part…but rather the whole.
Not just mere words…casually spoken,
but rather a promise...from heart and soul.

Not just a wife…but my companion.
Not just for now….but through years and years.
Not just a feeling…or fleeting emotion,
but one spoken through heartfelt grateful tears.

Not just a touch…but something far deeper.
Not just a kiss…but one filled with love.
Not just a life…lived for the moment,
but rather the life I've always dreamed of.

Wednesday, December 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 15 May 2016

I like the framework for this poem- the format goes hand in glove with the message. Romantic, emotionally stirring, a feeling that we are listening in to the musings of a man in love

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 December 2015

Your thoughts flow very beautifully. Nice drop.

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Shakil Ahmed 02 December 2015

you have dexterously presented the beautiful thoughts in poetic language, thanks for sharing

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Martina Moriarty Mc Carthy 02 December 2015

Beautiful loving thoughts in this stunning poem loved reading

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