If This Be Love Poem by Perry Biggerstaff

If This Be Love

Rating: 5.0


Hope gives in to longing thought,
of all desires that I've sought.
A wanton heart might now be caught,
if this be love, that you have brought.

Can love..hope..grow where pain abides;
Where doubt and fear are justified?
I willingly throw both arms wide,
if faith can bring you to my side.

Give in! give in! My heart cries out,
For once find out what loves about.
These walls I've built so strong and stout,
like Jericho, fall at your shout.

A newborn babe, my soul lies bare;
vulnerable to trap and snare.
I gladly place all in your care.
If this be love...that we would share.


Perry Biggerstaff

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hopeful...cautious...anticipation.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 September 2012

'like jericho', wow a fantastic love poem with a fine flow to it dat i soo enjoyd. Pls do read my newest to tel me if its ok.

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John Brown 25 September 2012

Nice poem Perry. Have you made a mistake in the last verse: 'my sould'? or is it me?

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 October 2018

I willingly throw both arms wide, if faith can bring you to my side. These walls I've built so strong and stout, like Jericho, fall at your shout.....if this be love, then we should share it......... thank u dear poet. a very fine poem well worded and meaningful. tony

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* Sunprincess * 10 June 2015

........beautiful theme and beautiful flow :) ★

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Chinedu Dike 14 December 2014

I like the rhyme pattern of the poem. Love is a positive emotion and should be encouraged and nurtured on its arrival to blossom. A lovely poem well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Beach Girl 08 July 2014

What a beautiful poem, so full of emotion. Love the reference to the Walls of Jericho falling or surrendering like a heart in love.

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Eindaray Kyaw 27 September 2012

I gladly place all in your care. If this be love...that we would share. I enjoy this verse...beautifully rhythm poem! !

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