No Fun At Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
No Fun At
No fun
Thursday,10th October 2019
No fun
and train a gun
at the innocent people
who are coming up as sincere individuals
they have their own instinct
to act
as per their confidence
and seize the chance
they may not have a modern approach
and as such
may lack the good use of the language
but ably manage
they may not have refined use of words
yet look forward
without caring for its criticism
and present it with the wisdom
so encourage them in their effort
make good rapport
instead of offering fun
an allow it to run smoothly
Hasmukh Mehta
so encourage them in their effort make good rapport instead of offering fun an allow it to run smoothly........definitely, we must encourage them in their effort. A brilliant poem is nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.
We should not criticism others rather we should support and care for them all. An interesting poem is beautifully penned.10
An excellent poem with a great message for all. That is best way to gain their love and respect. They will feel good too.Loved the way you have expressed the idea in a poem. Thanks for sharing.
Beautiful poem Hasmukh Mehta ji! Giti Tyagi, Patiala, Oct 12,2019
True, it is no use using force against innocent individuals. And you so rightly frame that they may not be in the least able to understand any type of criticism and the only way to approach them is through peace...an apt portrayal in the times of guns and warfare. (The pencil sketch is beautiful and real. However, I would like to suggest that the pic may not be suitable for the content.) Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Oct 11,2019
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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so encourage them in their effort make good rapport instead of offering fun an allow it to run smoothly Hasmukh Mehta .poemhunter