No Clue, ....... Poem by Lyn Paul

No Clue, .......

Rating: 5.0


Broken
Torn
Burnt
Flamed
Heading down that road unnamed
Bitten
Knawed
Chewed
Spat
Now knowing where your at
Tender
Raw
Yet
Ready to live
Beginning to smile
Happy to give
Hurting
Broken
Yet
Healing too
Laughing at those
Who.....
Have...
No Clue.....



Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Thursday, October 24, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,life,survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny Draper 25 October 2013

They do know something we don't and laugh with a cynicism beyond human ken.

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Sandra Regan 31 October 2013

Awesome poem. Great imagery.

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Ken E Hall 31 October 2013

A gift to have them in the back yard all your words sum its life to the tee and they always have the last laugh...clever Lyn...regards

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Amitava Sur 27 October 2013

A lovely penning, using the words miserly but affirmative., , , Very nice

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 26 October 2013

the punchline is clear, an astounding write!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 October 2013

Woah subliminal touches, makes for an aweinspiring poem. Like yor concrete shape poem structure like verse. Take care.

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