Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 10,311 Points (17.03.1965)

Climb That Mountain - Poem by Lyn Paul

I have given to all
Yet I have never given to myself
I have guided so many
Yet not myself
I have fallen
Yet I know I can rise
Because of this wonderful world....
The heavenly skies
I have seen the smiles I bring
To so many, when my heart sings
I have seen the joy I get from the simple things around
This fulfils me so much... My every wound
I know I have found it is time to cherish who I am... for why
To raise the lows and make them high
I am so blessed for who I have been
Stemmed from the pain of what I have seen
The aches the pains are open to us all
There are those waiting, waiting to fall
Yet we must rise... For only ourselves
To see achievement of heartfelt wealth
So Climb That Mountain. Even if you don't make the height
You will be proud you never.... Gave up the fight




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

That is all we can do is never give up. Life does turn around but we cannot just sit there and wait for it to turn.

Comments about Climb That Mountain by Lyn Paul

  • Silver Star - 3,959 Points Zinnia Narcissa (5/11/2015 3:55:00 AM)

    so beautiful message (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 475 Points Zoila T. Flores (5/9/2015 5:39:00 PM)

    Great message to all of us who are aching (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 805 Points Katrina Savvidis (5/9/2015 2:12:00 AM)

    Giving can be somewhat depleting but it matters way too much to me to live any other way. I smiled when I read the comment of Diane Hine. Keep blessing us with your magic Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,236 Points Nassy Fesharaki (5/7/2015 12:33:00 PM)

    You must be working in a kind of help providing organization like a NGO.
    Thanks for planting hope in smile's soil. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,548 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/23/2015 6:13:00 PM)

    Lovely verse...inspiring!
    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (1/24/2015 11:00:00 PM)

    Practice before you preach very nice glory to be Allah (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,019 Points Savita Tyagi (1/24/2015 6:51:00 PM)

    There comes a time when by giving to ourselves we give to others. Great poem. Loved reading it as member poem. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,424 Points Lorraine Colon (1/24/2015 2:17:00 PM)

    Sometimes all it takes are a few words of encouragement to inspire us and get us back on track. And your poem certainly does that. Wonderful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,026 Points Rajnish Manga (1/24/2015 12:03:00 PM)

    Your poetry is superb and the style matchless. The words and the language ensure spontaneity of expression and clarity of meaning. I would like to quote the following lines: I am so blessed for who I have been / Stemmed from the pain of what I have seen. Congrats for being No.1 still again. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 539 Points Phyllis Strong (1/24/2015 10:12:00 AM)

    I to would rather try and fail, than not to have tried at all. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,043 Points Bernard Snyder (1/24/2015 9:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, Lyn! Exceptional! ! ! I can relate to this so well because I too have given so much! Thanks for sharing and a well-deserved 'poem of the day' selection! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,827 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/24/2015 8:25:00 AM)

    Congrats Lyn for the Inspirational poem and beautiful poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,351 Points Kim Barney (1/24/2015 6:52:00 AM)

    Great poem. Very inspirational. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,515 Points Valerie Dohren (1/24/2015 6:14:00 AM)

    A poem of hope and wisdom. Well done Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,038 Points Diane Hine (1/24/2015 5:14:00 AM)

    Hey Lyn, this poem is more energizing than a half a dozen energy bars! I'll take it with me on my next hike. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,827 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/27/2014 8:31:00 AM)

    Thoughtful write once again from your pen.
    Beautiful lines.
    You will be proud you never.... Gave up the fight
    Very true said......Never give up...Poem full of inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,035 Points Ken E Hall (1/25/2014 3:21:00 PM)

    Life ain't easy but with the help of Lyn we will get to the top...great poem indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (1/18/2014 3:54:00 AM)

    A very beautiful and thoughtful poem, full of inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,514 Points Hans Vr (1/18/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem full of wisdom and inspiration (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points marvin brato (1/17/2014 4:03:00 PM)

    Very inspirational expression... courage is what we nee to climb that mountain of challenges in life! Thanks for sharing Lyn. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, May 8, 2015


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