Lyn Paul

Gold Star - 8,806 Points (17.03.1965)

Climb That Mountain - Poem by Lyn Paul

I have given to all
Yet I have never given to myself
I have guided so many
Yet not myself
I have fallen
Yet I know I can rise
Because of this wonderful world....
The heavenly skies
I have seen the smiles I bring
To so many, when my heart sings
I have seen the joy I get from the simple things around
This fulfils me so much... My every wound
I know I have found it is time to cherish who I am... for why
To raise the lows and make them high
I am so blessed for who I have been
Stemmed from the pain of what I have seen
The aches the pains are open to us all
There are those waiting, waiting to fall
Yet we must rise... For only ourselves
To see achievement of heartfelt wealth
So Climb That Mountain. Even if you don't make the height
You will be proud you never.... Gave up the fight




Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL


Poet's Notes about The Poem

That is all we can do is never give up. Life does turn around but we cannot just sit there and wait for it to turn.

Comments about Climb That Mountain by Lyn Paul

  • Freshman - 935 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (4/23/2015 6:13:00 PM)

    Lovely verse...inspiring!
    Dorothy
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  • Gold Star - 39,733 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (1/24/2015 11:00:00 PM)

    Practice before you preach very nice glory to be Allah (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,641 Points Savita Tyagi (1/24/2015 6:51:00 PM)

    There comes a time when by giving to ourselves we give to others. Great poem. Loved reading it as member poem. Thank you for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Lorraine Colon (1/24/2015 2:17:00 PM)

    Sometimes all it takes are a few words of encouragement to inspire us and get us back on track. And your poem certainly does that. Wonderful poem! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,931 Points Rajnish Manga (1/24/2015 12:03:00 PM)

    Your poetry is superb and the style matchless. The words and the language ensure spontaneity of expression and clarity of meaning. I would like to quote the following lines: I am so blessed for who I have been / Stemmed from the pain of what I have seen. Congrats for being No.1 still again. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 493 Points Phyllis Strong (1/24/2015 10:12:00 AM)

    I to would rather try and fail, than not to have tried at all. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,951 Points Bernard Snyder (1/24/2015 9:45:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem, Lyn! Exceptional! ! ! I can relate to this so well because I too have given so much! Thanks for sharing and a well-deserved 'poem of the day' selection! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/24/2015 8:25:00 AM)

    Congrats Lyn for the Inspirational poem and beautiful poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,853 Points Kim Barney (1/24/2015 6:52:00 AM)

    Great poem. Very inspirational. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,264 Points Valerie Dohren (1/24/2015 6:14:00 AM)

    A poem of hope and wisdom. Well done Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,811 Points Diane Hine (1/24/2015 5:14:00 AM)

    Hey Lyn, this poem is more energizing than a half a dozen energy bars! I'll take it with me on my next hike. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,107 Points Geetha Jayakumar (1/27/2014 8:31:00 AM)

    Thoughtful write once again from your pen.
    Beautiful lines.
    You will be proud you never.... Gave up the fight
    Very true said......Never give up...Poem full of inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,578 Points Ken E Hall (1/25/2014 3:21:00 PM)

    Life ain't easy but with the help of Lyn we will get to the top...great poem indeed...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Rubab Atwal (1/18/2014 3:54:00 AM)

    A very beautiful and thoughtful poem, full of inspiration. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,399 Points Hans Vr (1/18/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem full of wisdom and inspiration (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points marvin brato (1/17/2014 4:03:00 PM)

    Very inspirational expression... courage is what we nee to climb that mountain of challenges in life! Thanks for sharing Lyn. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,761 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (1/16/2014 6:16:00 PM)

    A moving and motivational mandate! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (1/16/2014 12:19:00 AM)

    This is what we often are Lyn. You are articulating it very pictorially much to our appreciation. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Perry Biggerstaff (1/15/2014 5:56:00 PM)

    Very nice! There is a great symbiotic feel to this poem between pain and the way it makes us stronger, wiser and sometimes even happier... by helping us relish the moments. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,264 Points Valerie Dohren (1/15/2014 2:14:00 PM)

    Another excellent write, full of your wisdom, with many fine lines. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 17, 2015


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