Night Time Poem by Bradley Stewart

Night Time

Rating: 4.7


the night is cold
the night is sad for some
the night is so dark
the night come and go like my love for you
the night is time for me to sleep and dream of you
the night is everwhere I go
the night is time for some people to have fun
the night is so alone for me
i hate the night becuase is reminds me of you
the night was when we had fun
the night is so alone now
the night is what you love
but now the night is what i hate beuase of you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pablo Obama 20 July 2013

because is...beuase...everwhere...there is this thing called spell check, you should use it :)

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Emily Price 27 August 2009

hi liked your poem its good

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Jay Lawson 09 December 2008

Hi i think this poem is great and i can esily relate!

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Jacqui Deutsch 06 December 2008

hey keep up the good work but i would suggest going over your work and re-reading it because you repeated a little bit but i still like it

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