Night Breaking To Morning Poem by ritty patnaik

Night Breaking To Morning

Rating: 5.0


night is slipping by,
darkness is stepping down
nocturnal dreams break
to usher in the morning light,
mild rays of sun,
peeps through the window
as if to say something!

morning is getting up,
from the warmth of the quilt,
with rising noise of birds,
outside the window, looking
for breakfast, in the ground cover.

with a cup of coffee, and
in a exhilerated mood
morning wakes up to greet
the day......
a sunny, plain day, where
dreams have no place to stay.
they die, giving rise
to realities of life
.which have come to stay!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 14 September 2009

Your last stanza coveys the message very well in poetic language! 10! -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 09 September 2009

It seems you're already missing dreams, perhaps a bit of daydreaming may cheer you up. Very good write Ritty, very refreshing, very thought provoking, indded this alternation is great!

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Saadat Tahir 07 September 2009

beautiful musings... and yes u convey the lazy ruminantion so well... sitting... rocking and thinking...with a smile maybe... hey get another coffee... ;) very well written and rfeltive lines cheers

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