A Quick Surrender Poem by ritty patnaik
A Quick Surrender
timelessness
of a moment of joy
in the mind, can remain
as a epitome of happiness
forever.
seasoned love lasts,
becomes immortal
in the mind of man,
as he moves on,
in the ladder of life.
steadfastness in character,
helps to endure,
ups and downs of life,
with resistant will,
to undergo lifes fall.
righteousness excels
all forms of qualitative
personality,
in turning towards the
right direction
to meet the goal of life.
good deeds makes our
destiny strong in next birth,
bad deeds makes us suffer
in pain and misery
a quick surrender,
on the lotus feet,
gives inner bliss,
which is the
eternal quality of god !
In the moment there is no time, but it contains all we have done, our samsara from our past lives, can be removed by good deeds, if we live wrong we suffer now and in the future, because the lessons learned are wrong.. Once on right path don't deviate. Thank you for the reminder. Bob
This is a philosophical and inspiration poem Ritty. I admire the way you moved down the page to explain your message, and I agree in that what we do in this lifetime has a bearing on the next. Great writing! Love Karin
an excellent poem once again ma'm....essence of living captured so beautifully...10
A wise write Ritty, you really write from the centre where you're seated with undwindling faith, a great message!
its wonderful, timelessness of a moment of joy....quick surrender at the lotus feet.. you have brought out the hidden gems of humanity....if readers can understand and embrace what it says.....the world shall be a better place.... good poem.
wonderful.... time...its a concept...relative.... i dont know whether time exists or not... there certainly are some moments which go beyond and space... loved the poem ma'am. thank you.
only those blessed with independence can make a total surrender...only they have the courage to accept the outcome of surrender...
another thought provoking, well written poem Ritty..........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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THIS BECOMES A NICE DEVOTIONAL PRAYER IN VERSE! 10! -Raj Nandy