Never Forget Me Poem by Kaitlin Parsons

Never Forget Me

Rating: 5.0


Darkness is a value
That no one should erase
Tears are proof of sorrow
Filling everyday
Hurting is a feature
That comes to suicide
Breaking is the truthh
When so many have lied
Razor sharp edges
Bleeding in black
Hating the world
What do you think of that
Loving whats out of reach
Just wanting to die
Killing all your hope
Depressing to find
Hanging from a tree
Bleeding on the floor
Jumping from a building
A note on the door
Sayying your sorry
For the trouble you have caused
I know you didnt want me
Because of all my Flaws
If any who cared
Begin to miss me
Remember my name
And never Forget me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonnie Collins 03 February 2008

The poem has a very negitive feel, if you were trying to potray that emotion it came through excellent, however, suiside is such a serious topic, your poetry is good! ! Bonnie Collins

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Bill Smith 03 February 2008

deep, deep, deep well writ smiffy

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