Nectar Of Love (A Comment On Valsa George's Poem When The Sky Rained Nectar) Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Nectar Of Love (A Comment On Valsa George's Poem When The Sky Rained Nectar)
When I am in need of nectar the sky rains nectar,
but sometimes when I forget my sun,
it rains fires and heat strokes.
It happens in love, after passing a restless day,
when I tell the tale of a sleeping princess,
and the moon sleeps on my right arm.
I feel a touch on my vacant left arm,
and I wonder how the sun has become so cool,
to make the sun smile I tell once again already told jokes.
Soddenly the clouds rise and start raining,
moon smiles in his dreams, lips of the sun busy in that moment
tasting delicious nectar of love, its sweetness and its charm!
Magnificently crafted imaginative write. Yes, the nectar of love could tame everything even the hotness of the sun. A great poem on life.10+++++
I am happy that the word 'nectar' used by me in my poem turned out to be the inspiration behind this highly imaginative poem! Thank you for mentioning my name here.... Akhtar ji!
A highly imaginative poem based on metaphor. How does nectar of love seep in conjugal life is nicely painted. A gorgeous poem shared amazingly.10
O I'm Swallow- on this bough to sky, with pair of beck and dried throat, waiting for little mercy of GOD! I'm thirsty here, there and everywhere water and water but I'm wonder these waters do not quench me! The rain, yes the rain is nectar; not this is normal earthly water this nectar only quenches my dried throat forever! //// Excellent comment and excellent writings- SIR
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The nectar of love is sipped by every lover. Imaginative.++10