N- White Swans)) Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

N- White Swans))

Rating: 5.0


The black sea so black-
The cruisers were accustomed,
And white sailing boats
Of muses have turned...
- To a seagull, -you will-by tell...
Have not guessed...
You look..Reviews on the sun,
Here they, these white swans,
They soon will begin,
Own solo, successively...
Into the black sea the sharks
Were accustomed...
With dolphins masks...
They feels of the sweet a smell...
And jute to reddening of
The black sea... with closed by eyes...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 08 March 2009

This is a lovely picture and you write of both birds and fish so the reader is drawn into the image - a very well crafted poem Tsira -- good write....10 from Fay...xx

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Fiona Davidson 08 March 2009

Lovely write Tsira...a picture well crafted...thanks...10++

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Lynda Robson 10 March 2009

Your poetry is so beautiful Tsira, you weave magic with your words, 10 Lynda xx

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Cigar Aficionado 10 March 2009

I am thankful every day to read these lovely works you write so poignant thinking deep..Thanks..

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Sandra Fowler 10 March 2009

Both beauty and tragedy are painted into this elegaic poem. I can almost hear the music from, 'Swan Lake'.10, of course. Warm regards, Sandra

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 09 March 2009

thoughtful vision, nature talks, thanks for sharing

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Kris Smith 08 March 2009

What a beautiful picture you paint my artistic friend 10 ++ Chris and wishes for your safety Chris

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