Mystic Love Poem by Amitava Sur

Mystic Love

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Though I cannot find you now,
Anywhere on this earth,
And everyone is saying repeatedly
That no longer you exist.

But o’ my dear my love for ever
I still feel you to be around me
Getting your body’s intoxicating smell
And I hear that chiming of your ankle bells.
Your whispering voice I can hear
And feel your hot breath on me.

Though I feel the saltiness
Both in air and in my eyes,
My mind fills with a solace and it calms
When I dream and feel your soul with me.

You shine brightly in the core of my heart
As a delightful glittering star.
I feel to be completely drenched
With the aura of your amazing love.

Sitting alone in the dead of night
Eagerly I await your arrival anytime.

Night after night being awaken,
Expecting you to come with a big smile.
Looking to the path under moonlit night
Keeping the doors open outright.

Waiting eagerly for you, my love
To welcome and lead you inside.
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Amitava (26.9.2015) 6-30 am

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Mystic Love
Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 30 September 2015

We never stop looking for our loved one. We feel their presence next to us, but long for their touch as well. How important that physical contact is. How incomplete our love feels without their arms to hold us, and their lips to kiss us, and their eyes to gaze upon us. We live our lives impatiently, waiting for that day we can be reunited in some other realm. Beautiful, heart-wrenching words that bring tears to my eyes.

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Savita Tyagi 30 September 2015

This is simply marvelous. When two souls breath as one that love can never die. Your love poems are simply amazing. As if your love resides in your poems. Loved the picture too.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2015

Nice work with the muse of love. Mystic love!

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Hans Vr 30 September 2015

Superb poem with a fantastic picture. I loved to read it sooo much.

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