My Wish Poem by Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam

My Wish



I would like to be a dolphin
An eel or seal zealous on fin
The blue sea to embrace all
Relentless waves purifying all.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Lacovara 16 September 2013

Such a lovely wish...I live near the Atlantic Ocean and it's daily might and beauty captivate me. Such a huge expanse makes my troubles seem miniscule, at times. Your poem took me to those thoughts. Well done. I will continue to explore your writings, as to gain insight to your culture and the calling by which you write poetry. Have a day of delight! PEACE

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 September 2013

Relentless waves purifying all. There is no scope for that on land. Beautifully presented. Thank you.

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Yasmin Khan 01 September 2013

A beautiful wish expressed in a metaphor

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