My Unattainable Star Poem by Warren Chan

My Unattainable Star

Rating: 4.1


Star light, star bright,
The most beautiful star in my sight,
I wish I may, I wish I might,
To be with you for just one night.
To shoot through the sky in an endless flight,
To bask in your grace-
Yes, just one night.
But unfortunately you are but a star in the sky
And no matter how hard I try and try,
You’re still a star-
In that yonder sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gina PrettyBrownEyes 27 March 2006

its like a little expensive peice of chocolate wrapped in gold. its small, sweet, makes you think, and its something to savor..

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Bkhj Chen 04 March 2005

The comments says it all. Are these poems any short of the great, celebrated poems? Not in any way. In more than a few aspects, i think poems like this is better than the classic ones. man, I wish people would say things like this about my poems.

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Tian Anaemic 04 March 2005

Hey~! i like how this poem is short, and it's awesome! :)

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Ainaa Azhar 04 March 2005

Very sweet and simple that makes it seem like such a sweet romanticsm poem. If you put this poem in the middle of that of Blake's, I wouldnt tell the difference. =)

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