My Tomorrow (Revised) Poem by Heather Burns

My Tomorrow (Revised)

Rating: 5.0


Stepping out
of the
shadows into
the light
my tomorrow
appears

Standing in
front of me
my knight
in shining
armour

His eyes like
pools of amber
I would like
to take a
swim get lost
in them

forget reality
stay there
forever in
complete bliss.

Monday, September 23, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: knight
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yasmin Khan 25 September 2013

To get lost in the pool of amber eyes....a sheer poetical statement

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Danny Draper 25 September 2013

The eyes have it and a dream may be fulfilled.

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Dave Walker 24 September 2013

Sometimes we all need to forget reality even if it's just for a short time. A great poem.

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