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My Tomorrow (revised)

Stepping out
of the
shadows into
the light
my tomorrow
appears

Standing in
front of me
my knight
in shining
armor

His eyes like
pools of amber
I would like
to take a
swim get lost
in them

forget reality
stay there
forever in
complete bliss.

Submitted: Monday, September 23, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013


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  • Yasmeen Khan (9/25/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    To get lost in the pool of amber eyes....a sheer poetical statement

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  • Danny Draper (9/25/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    The eyes have it and a dream may be fulfilled.

  • Thomas A Robinson (9/25/2013 2:03:00 AM)

    sometimes the eyes often lie
    what we see is often in disguise
    bliss / blissfulness are not the same
    real / reality is your guesing game

  • Dave Walker (9/24/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    Sometimes we all need to forget reality even if it's just for a short time.
    A great poem.

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