Heather Burns

My Tomorrow (Revised) - Poem by Heather Burns

Stepping out
of the
shadows into
the light
my tomorrow

Standing in
front of me
my knight
in shining

His eyes like
pools of amber
I would like
to take a
swim get lost
in them

forget reality
stay there
forever in
complete bliss.

Topic(s) of this poem: knight

Comments about My Tomorrow (Revised) by Heather Burns

  • Veteran Poet - 1,015 Points Yasmeen Khan (9/25/2013 8:37:00 AM)

    To get lost in the pool of amber eyes....a sheer poetical statement (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 481 Points Danny Draper (9/25/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    The eyes have it and a dream may be fulfilled. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (9/25/2013 2:03:00 AM)

    sometimes the eyes often lie
    what we see is often in disguise
    bliss / blissfulness are not the same
    real / reality is your guesing game (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,127 Points Dave Walker (9/24/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    Sometimes we all need to forget reality even if it's just for a short time.
    A great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 31, 2014

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