My Valentine Poem by Heather Burns

My Valentine

Rating: 4.8


If we could
have met
when we were
very young
you would
have been
my love of
life

my passion
fruit
my valentine

I would
have loved
you never
desiring
another

My heart
would wrap
around you
forming an
insulation
protecting
you from
this world

However fate
for seen this
whispered
no.!
A love like
this is not
allowed.

So.!
we must deal
with what we
have been
offered
loving
friendship..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 19 July 2013

A very passionate utterance of love for someone who somehow didn; t have the good fortune to be wrapped in your loving embrace, but follows you like a substantial and tangible presence through out your life! Enjoyed! !

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Valerie Dohren 20 July 2013

Not all relationships can become what we wish it to be. Very good write.

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Dave Walker 20 July 2013

A great poem, sometimes we miss what we hope for, but we can make the most of what we do get.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2013

we must deal with what we have been offered loving friendship.. Beautiful...

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Lucifera Santez 20 July 2013

the love denied. its enlightening....................

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Sekharan Pookkat 22 July 2013

Long live true friendship

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R.j. Wynn 22 July 2013

Shhhhhhh, not too loudly.

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Ambrosia A 22 July 2013

Everything is decided by destiny. We should count our blessings if at least we remain as friends forever instead of loosing them. A great poetic tribute by honest loving Heather's heart. Enjoyed it.

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Rekha Mandagere 21 July 2013

So honest and beautiful: -)

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 July 2013

Loving friendship....So beautiful..flow of the poem is beautiful too and message it conveyed is so true... Very lovely poem.

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