My Surreal World Poem by John McClay

My Surreal World



I wish I could show you
My surreal world
That you have inspired

I wish you could see
What I see
When I look at you

I wish I could tell you
All of the feelings I have
These feelings for you

I wish I could save you
From the agonizing
Love-less world

I wish this world was forever
And I didn’t
Have to wake up

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 07 April 2009

We all have wishes like this. Nicely composed. We can join in spirit.

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John McClay

John McClay

NewPort Beach, California
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