My Searching Mind Poem by Dave Alan Walker

My Searching Mind

Rating: 5.0


Sitting down on empty
with a blank mind
waiting for inspiration
of another kind

Lost in a sea of serpents
feeling strangled and deprived
my minds craving literature
but doesn't know what kind

Talking heads with destorted voises
nothing making sense
just garbled noises

Words and pictures
meaning nothing but noise
a kaleidoscope of colours
that can never fill a void
I'm in the land of nothingness
with no way out

I'll search and I'll search
until I find the words and the palette
to unlock this madness
and find my way out

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
After reading so many books I find it hard to find any
I like. After sitting and thinking about it I came up with this.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 22 March 2013

Original, quirky with great rhythm and flow! Inspired write!

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Jesus Diaz Llorico 24 March 2013

beautiful poem. i love to read this kind of poems.

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Valerie Dohren 25 March 2013

Hope you find a good read soon Dave - this one is excellent.

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Smoky Hoss 26 March 2013

I understand Dave, me too man! Great poem, hang in there, and keep on truckin'...

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David Wood 02 April 2013

This is just hiw I feel when I sit down & write a poem!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 30 March 2013

A nice mind searching for the Great has created a beautiful poem now!

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Gary Kedron 27 March 2013

realy a great poem! ! ! ! glad I took the time to read it.... there was something in there I needed to hear.....or nothing to speak of..sorry play on words, inspired.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 March 2013

sometimes I go blank for a day or two. thank you for sharing my feelings!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 27 March 2013

sometimes I go blank for a day or two. thank you for sharing my feelings!

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