My Response To A 'Programmer's Poem' Poem by Madathil Rajendran Nair

My Response To A 'Programmer's Poem'

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(The poem titled “Programmer’s Poem” quoted below is by an unknown author. It was e-mailed to me by my brother during the time the world was going through a financial melt-down a few years ago. My response to it appears below it.)

Programmer's Poem
(Unknown author)

I start my day by sitting on a chair,
Giving my monitor a hard, cold stare,
By evening I'm done with another coding.
Oh! This has become a routine so boring.

Like all, I entered this field with great hope,
Jobs were many and there was plenty of scope,
Dreams of joining the likes of Gates,
And a chance to make money in the States.

This, I entered the world of bytes,
Only to realize that reality bites.
'Coz a programmer's life, isn't all that cozy.
The bed of software isn't all that rosy.

Seeing the monitor all day n night,
Have taken the power off my eyesight,
Late to bed n late to rise,
Has made me wealthy, but not healthy n wise.

Working holidays, busy weekends.
No time for family, no time for friends,
My job steals most of my time,
Helplessly, I watch this crime.

Just for few bits of money,
I forego those moments with my Honey,
When I should be out - having fun,
I'm telling a comp, what's to be done.

I hate you, yet I can't get away,
'Coz, I need the money u pay.
God, to thee I pray,
If there be one - show me the way.
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My Response:

The way has come now in the form
Of global crisis, the killer storm
Shaken to the bottom, out of form
My boss called me just to inform

That he didn’t need me any more
And that I am free like before
To roam the streets and go where I wish
Like a forsaken dog and perish

Oh Lord, Oh Lord, I didn’t see
When I cursed the monitor Thee
In the glitter all over its face
Were You always smiling at me

Lord of Lords, please give me my job
PC, monitor, my fatigued yawn
Take anything in exchange you want
Wife, kids, home or all that I flaunt!

For I know that I only loved
One and only one so fond
And that is me, the rest don’t count
Keep me to the PC always bound

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The reasons for this poem are detailed in the body of the poem text itself.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Uma Ram 05 May 2015

Sir on more diamond to your crown...Thanks for the lovely verses shared. Liked it very much sir, and have to mention here once again...I JUST ENJOYED READING EVERY SINGLE WORD OF MY FIRST LOVE LETTER...Thanks for the beautiful poems shared sir.

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Rajesh Thankappan 13 April 2015

Both the poems have their own vision and wisdom . W e all know, being jobless is a curse and having a hectic job with scarcely anytime for the family, too is a curse. But I would rather prefer the latter.

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Valsa George 11 April 2015

The poem by the anonymous author and your response to it..... Both I liked much! They represent two ways of looking at the same problem....When we wander aimless without a job, we long to get into a job! Once we are in the job, we lament that all our time is consumed by a monotonous job without any quality time to spend with the family! This shows that happiness is so relative and it depends more on our attitude! Humorous and thought provoking at the same time!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 April 2015

When there job there is always a way to hate it. When there is no job its need is enhanced many-fold. Beautiful response to a poem that might have gone viral at its time. Thank you.

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