My Pleasure Poem by Abdul Wahab

My Pleasure

Rating: 5.0


A strictly forbidden place
Perhaps you would like

To enter into
As it would give you more

Pleasure than entering
Into a place

Very normal
As breaking rules

Gives you extra punch
Extra kick

Showers you as a rain
With exquisite delight

That’s why
Once a robot said

Man is very ridiculous
And I say that is ‘’will “

The same had happened with
Adam and Eve

As you all know
They ate the forbidden fruit

And that was sweeter
Than the normal

Pleasure is a light
That enters into a heart

And it can blow
In many ways

in many forms
Some one need coarse

Some one very fine
To let them

To arouse and feel them
the bliss of it

my greatest pleasure
In life is

Doing what once people said
‘You can not do ‘

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Primrose Tee 05 May 2014

it was a pleasure reading this poem

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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

when people say one cannot do it, that makes the person more eager to do it. And spurs them on to accomplish. I did not mean to be critical just thinking out loud. I love your work

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Heather Wilkins 05 June 2013

Adam and Eve ate the forbidden fruit but at a great price. Was the apple really worth it? I really don't think so. (I think the apple is a metaphor) a really nice write.

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