My Mom Poem by Ash win

My Mom

Rating: 5.0


On a lazy day like today
I find myself slumped
nothing to do
noone to meet

All friends lost - to
our forceful existence
to the hushes of work
to the demands of life

In a corner I find - A doll
once held with love
with such such care & passion - Now
slumped in a corner untouched uncared

I call my mom to tell her my fear
Am I unwanted Am I uncared
I just hear her voice - So
full of love

No more questions
No more answers
I know I am loved
I smile to her a twinkle in my eye

She reads my mind - Says
Everything Ok?
Love you mom - I say
I love you so.....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kee Thampi 17 October 2008

a motherly love provoke me and again want it lavishly call my mom to tell her my fear Am I unwanted Am I uncared I just hear her voice - So full of love

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Chinedu Dike 10 March 2017

Very heartfelt. As soft as a mother's love. Thanks for sharing.

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Nandhini .... 10 March 2017

Thnx :)

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Madan M 23 February 2012

OuR dearly mum will be a solace to lively days.... be happy with heR. I never forget my days with heR

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Srikanth Parthasarathy 22 October 2008

Your mom must've been really proud reading this.

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Barbara Terry 18 October 2008

I am very glad you have your mother to love and care for you even now that you are grown up. I had love once, but no from my mother, but from her best friend who cared for me from teh time I was born until I was ten years old, with intervals of visiting my mother. Everytime I went to stay with my mother for a bit, it was like I was going to the baby sitter, she just that unconcerned. This is a very nice tribute to the woman who bore you into the world so you could live and make your own contribution. Thank you for sharing, Nandy. I give you a solid 10 for this hearfelt poem. Hugs, Barbara

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Kesav Easwaran 17 October 2008

your doll, you the doll mom, and your mom...a mom can't leave her 'baby doll' uncared, grown up or not...the doll's inviting gesture to receive mom's love...good idea behind this write, Nandhini 10

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