Treasure Island

Ethan Ying


My Love for You


My Love for you
Is far beyond description.

You draw me towards you.
Your smile, your attitude,
Your flowing, long tresses,
And your caring nature.

You are a great musician,
You are a caring girl.
You are not only beautiful,
But you have a large, expanding heart.

Submitted: Wednesday, September 25, 2013
Edited: Friday, September 27, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is dedicated to someone I have a slight crush on. She doesn't, I believe, know that I like her.

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  • Beach Girl (9/26/2013 6:53:00 AM)

    Very lovely poem Ethan! Beautiful words for a beautiful and sweet girl. I think I know who she is. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (9/25/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    Wow! What a nice poem to begin with! Is this your first? It's lovely and I give you 10/10 for this.
    Very pure and pristine expression of love, I liked it very much.
    If you can write so well, I am sure very soon she will come to know about your crush on her. Just go ahead!
    Thanks for sharing your privacy through the note. (Report) Reply

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