Ethan Ying


Your Eyes


A mesmerizing dark-chocolate concoction,
So bright and full of laughter,
Luring me towards you.

Your eyes,
Are like precious jewels,
They blaze with emotion,
Yet are filled with love.

When you are upset,
Your eyes are like the ocean, angry.
Occasionally narrowing into slits,
Yet I still find you attractive.

I could stare into your chocolate orbs forever,
Like a dream come true.
I long to see you more,
Yet you keep your distance.

Submitted: Monday, October 07, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 08, 2013
Listen to this poem:

Form:


Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Your Eyes by Ethan Ying )

Enter the verification code :

  • Bronze Star - 5,213 Points Khairul Ahsan (11/7/2013 9:19:00 AM)

    It's wonderful and I gave it 10/10!
    You do have a poet's eye to see things and go deeper and the literary verve to express inner feelings in poetic language. Why haven't you written any more poem after just two? Please keep writing and post in this forum so that we all can read and share your thoughts.
    You have beautifully described 'her' eyes in this poem. If you love her, do not do things that would upset her, so that you do not have to see the angry waves of an ocean, 'occasionally narrowing into slits'. If you long to see her more, do things as would please her. It may take a lifetime to understand and grasp the ingredients of the two states of mood, though.
    My very best wishes... (Report) Reply

Read all 2 comments »

Trending Poets

Trending Poems

  1. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  2. If, Rudyard Kipling
  3. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  4. I Know Why The Caged Bird Sings, Maya Angelou
  5. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  6. Silent Noon, Dante Gabriel Rossetti
  7. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  8. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  9. As I Grew Older, Langston Hughes
  10. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost

Poem of the Day

poet Dante Gabriel Rossetti

Your hands lie open in the long fresh grass, --
The finger-points look through like rosy blooms:
Your eyes smile peace. The pasture gleams and glooms
...... Read complete »

   

New Poems

  1. Still Awake 2, Michael P. McParland
  2. Esprit de corps, Naveed Khalid
  3. Escaping Home, RoseAnn V. Shawiak
  4. Enjoying Conversations, RoseAnn V. Shawiak
  5. How Long A Breath of Moment Be...(r), Frank James Ryan Jr...FjR
  6. Communicating Through Talent, RoseAnn V. Shawiak
  7. Moments Of Refreshing Writing, RoseAnn V. Shawiak
  8. God., Th@ We N0t, sEaN nOrTh
  9. only Dfence against a rhythm - Boi, sEaN nOrTh
  10. Snuggle 2, Michael P. McParland
[Hata Bildir]