My Life Poem by yunni scholsatica

My Life

Rating: 3.0


when i was born,
i don't know,
what will happen in my life.

i just let it flows,
flows through the time,
i just feel,
tender hands that God gives to me.

that was my mom,
she has never wanted
to let me down,
always care for me,
smile when she sad,

i don't know what to do,
i just want to make her proud,
proud of me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C. P. Sharma 08 July 2009

A great poem, a great tribute to life and mother in so simple words. It would add to its beauty if you take a little care of English grammer. CP.

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Kesav Easwaran 28 October 2008

nice tribute to mother respect and affection rich...good piece, Yunni 10

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