My Imaginations Illusion Poem by Tiger Lily Love

My Imaginations Illusion

Rating: 5.0


I'm not imaging this
Am I?
The moments we shared?
The smiles
The laughs
Your chilling stare?

I'm not imaging this
Am I?
The way my heart started to race
The looks you gave me
The way your breath tickled my face?

You are not my imaginations illusion
You are so much more
The reason I've been thrown into confusion

Could it be
My mind has made a fool out of me?
Or it is a possibilty
That everything we are is a reality?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alla Simone 23 December 2012

I like the feeling of I'm not crazy, am I? that you've so skillfully captured verse after verse in this piece of writing. Great job!

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Stevie Taite 11 December 2012

Trust your instinct! Good one! X

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 11 December 2012

Hmm a mesmerizing moments romantic poem i enjoyd. U aint seeing illusions. Passions r real but how long they last is debatable.

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Lyn Paul 10 December 2012

This is great Tiger Lily... if it is not real it is then a beauty to dream. Thank you

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Aria Siren 10 December 2012

Ooooh. Very sweet poem mixed with doubt and reality. I like how you left it openended-it could be real or just a dream. Either way-I quite like it :) I'm not imaging this Am I? The way my heart started to race The looks you gave me The way your breath tickled my face? I love those butterfly feelings :) You captured it well. (Is this part 2 of the saga? :))

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