My Countrymen Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

My Countrymen



My countrymen want to make me mad
It seems they are very very bad
Whenever I become very sad
They seem to become very much glad
Although I am like their mom and dad
They treat me as if I am a cad
I can write it with blood on a pad
I would give them more things if I had.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Renu Kakkar 15 October 2011

nice thoughts..shown iin words

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Vipins Puthooran 15 October 2011

It's a good poem.. I like its rhyme pattern...nicely woven words

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Shadow Girl 14 October 2011

Interesting words..and u made them all rhyme..wow...nice. -SG

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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