My Changing Self Poem by alex sarich

My Changing Self

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I would like to translate

my mind of mangled mess

to those who have less

thoughts of profound hate.

cleared of self emotions

with a body of compassion

conceding to my devotions

toward guided aspiration.

the qualities of contentment

changing from resentment

twinned values of realism

transforming through altruism

Jan.2017

Monday, January 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: health
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 01 October 2019

An insightful introspective piece of poetry nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Alex.

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 August 2019

cleared of self emotions with a body of compassion conceding to my devotions toward guided aspiration. What a great desire to be free from negative feelings that kill our goodness.. thank u for your great spiritual wisdom. tony

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Alex Sarich 02 September 2019

thank you for your comments

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Elena Sandu 03 March 2017

Great penning, thank you! I guess there may be no better medication than such: cleared of self emotions with a body of compassion.

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Alex Sarich 24 January 2017

Thank you for your understanding.I appreciate that very much.

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