Musing Poem by Smoky Hoss

Musing



Conversing with myself over thoughts of 'home',
I ponder me, lonesome and alone,
Wondering... If I saw Heaven
And Heaven saw me
What then, would each of us truly see?
And moreover, which of the two
Would find the better view?
If I spoke what I thought to God
Could, possibly, He think it wise,
Or just all rather odd?
For whom would say anything to Him
That He had never heard before,
Time, and times again?
-Even so,
With all that God does vastly know,
I still must consider - for at least just a little while -
There certainly must be some words
That give Him cause to pause,
And even most likely, smile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
G Sweeney 30 September 2011

your poems give cause to pause!

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Jean Dament 26 January 2011

A unique & creative poem that I quite enjoyed. Well done. You are probably right that he already knows everything; so then what would we say to him that would be new. Spiritsong

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