from 'While Passing Through'/Spring
Walking beneath one—
the sidewalk purpled
by berries crushed—
I see why some
choose fruitlessness.
jazib, glad you like it. thank you for taking the time to read and comment. best to you! -glen
Yes, they missed out on the mess, but also on delicious, nutritious fruit! I grew up with purple-stained feet...
hey, laurie! i'm not surprised that you're the first one to comment. thank you always for your consideration and comments. a favor- i suspect you read it before i made some changes- in my attempt to give it more impact and make it better. would you look at it again? i'd be interested in your input. -glen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love it! ! ! ! The humor is crisp and the sentiment universally shared! ! ! ! Perkect humorous tanka! 10! ! !
thank you, susan for the strong affirmation. it's nice when you just go for a walk and the idea comes. be blessed! -glen