Mournful Cry Poem by Rukaya Majeed

Mournful Cry

Rating: 4.8


yet again the dark clouds
dispersed throughout the heaven
n sun beam, no raindrops
eyes are gazing them
but no hope, no smile
the life has gone
into dark shades
no rainbows, no peace
Wet eyes again moaning
Waiting for morrow
but no dusk, no dawn
Want to go somewhere secluded place
Where the thorns will stop peeling off soul
And roses will cure woe

Sunday, June 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: grief
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 June 2017

An impressive poetic grief. Thanks

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jaan Rua 11 June 2017

I'm very glad that you have found it impressive any way thank you ao much

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 June 2017

Grief! ! No peace! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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jaan Rua 11 June 2017

Thank you for finding my poem quite worthy of reading

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jaan Rua 11 June 2017

Thank you too for finding my poem quite worth of reading

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2017

No sun beam, NO rainDrops No rainbow, No peace moaning eyes, no dusk, no dawn, Where the thorns will stop peeling off soul in search of peace. Such a wonderful original expression of grief.. sooooooooooo fine, i have no words to praise you. Thank you. tony

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Gladys King 21 June 2017

Congratulations on poem of the day. A beautiful poem. Loved it.17241

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Bharati Nayak 21 June 2017

Want to go somewhere secluded place Where the thorns will stop peeling off soul And roses will cure woe- - - - - -Very poetic expression through metaphors of nature.A lovely write, thanks for sharing.

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Norah Tunney 21 June 2017

Hauntingly beautiful and sad. This too will pass my friend. But in the meantime be very gentle with yourself.I like the original way you express your grief Jan.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 June 2017

Where there is grief there is no smile, no raindrops, no dusk, no dawn. But when grief disappears peace comes and everythings go on normal. It is fantastic blues poem duly expressed.

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